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RH134-25: Minor text changes on 13.1. The Red Hat Enterprise Linux Boot Process

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      Description: https://rol.redhat.com/rol/roc/course/rh135-boot-chapter.html

      Under the “Boot, reboot, and shutdown” section, change “systemctl poweroff” so that poweroff is in bold. This will make it consistent with “systemctl reboot” which is in bold.

      The first sentence in the second paragraph below “Selecting a systemd target” is a little confusing. It reads, “It is possible for target to be a part of another target, for example the graphical.target include multi-user.target, which in depends on basic.target and others.” I believe it is more readable as, “It is possible for a target to be a part of another target, for example the graphical.target includes multi-user.target, which depends on basic.target and others.” There are three changes. Change “possible for target” to “possible for a target”, change "graphical.target include multi-user.target" to "graphical.target includes multi-user.target", and change “which in depends” to “which depends”.

            wboessen Wander Boessenkool (Inactive)
            rht-miphilli Michael Phillips
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