Excerpt from minimalism workshop notes [1].

• * Section 3 describes options but does not include tasks (Central Broker vs. Setting Up a Central Broker) - writers picked up this structure from the devs on the team
• Section 3 includes the information about advantages/disadvantages of each deployment pattern - could be improved by adding structure to make that information easier to find - use a structure that sets expectations for the reader so she can scan through to find the material that matters most to her
• Make sure descriptions in Section 3 include why a user would choose one deployment pattern over another, and links to implementation guides.
• Consider rewriting instances where the combination ‘AMQP protocol’ is used, to avoid using the word ‘protocol’ adjacent to the concept of ‘Advanced Message Queuing Protocol’. +1

[1]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ax_oG2aq7CSzou_2D28ZvnkeEDHMMzBw2zf-kYX8j7M/edit#