The Product Introduction was peer-reviewed during a minimalism workshop 18 Jan 2018. Notes captured from a google doc[1] that address specific writing examples have been transferred to sub-tasks. This jira captures notes that are more general.

General Notes

• This document may be serving (or trying to serve) multiple audiences and multiple purposes - release notes, marketing, technical user documentation
• The document is a hybrid - parts focus on performance, parts on key functionality
• Could this material be re-organized - renamed as a planning guide or broken out into multiple components - to get all the material across appropriately?
• This is feature-based writing, which we try to avoid - would benefit from a description of what the product does and what a user can do with it
• As a marketing introduction, the Key Features section is great

[1]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ax_oG2aq7CSzou_2D28ZvnkeEDHMMzBw2zf-kYX8j7M/edit#