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Bug
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Resolution: Done
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Major
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RHDEVDOCS Sprint 128, > Mar 15, RHDEVDOCS Sprint 129, > Apr 05, RHDEVDOCS Sprint 130, > Apr 26, RHDEVDOCS Sprint 130, > Apr 26
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- Don't use an article for product names, such as "the CDK"; see https://mojo.redhat.com/docs/DOC-1088906
- Use double minus ("--") to render as proper dashes.
- The following para is confusing and unclear:
Red Hat Development Suite 1.3 includes products such as Red Hat JBoss Developer Studio 10.3 and Red Hat Container Development Kit 2.4, as well as some dependencies for each of these products. One or more of the products that Red Hat Development Suite installs may require a separate Red Hat subscription. Development support for any of the installed products requires a relevant and active Red Hat subscription.
- It should say which products require what subscriptions
- It should be combined with the admonition that's right above it – it's also about subscriptions. Perhaps a separate section with its own heading – seeing as the subscriptions are such a confusing matter?
- Perhaps a table with all products and their resp[ective subscriptions?
- "An Online Installer that is a 40 Mb download" – it's not "Mb" but "MB".
- "As a result, they must not be used in production environments." That's not true. Ppl can use it anywhere they want, but they cannot expect RH support if something goes wrong.
- "For more information on Red Hat Technology Preview features support scope, see http://access.redhat.com/support/offerings/techpreview/." – Don't use bare URLs – use the page's title.
- "3. What is new in Red Hat Development Suite?" – Use capital case.
- Red Hat Development Suite includes the following components:" – There should be a version number behind the product name in this instance.
- "When a component is selected or deselected for installation, it’s dependencies are automatically selected or deselected for installation. For example, when Red Hat Container Development Kit is selected for installation, it’s dependencies -Vagrant, Cygwin and Oracle Virtual Box are automatically selected for installation." – "it's" = "it is"; "its" = possessive.
- "Vagrant, Cygwin and Oracle Virtual Box" – Always use serial comma.
- "Vagrant, Cygwin and Oracle Virtual Box" – Use correct product name: "VirtualBox".
- "-Vagrant" – Missing space after dash.
- "Try the Red Hat Development Suite installer using the following instructions: Red Hat Development Suite 1.3 Installation Guide" – Missing end-sentence period.
