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  1. OpenShift Bugs
  2. OCPBUGS-10053

Formatting and language enhancements in Driver Toolkit section

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    • Bug
    • Resolution: Done
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    • 4.13, 4.12, 4.11, 4.10
    • Documentation / SRO
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    • Low
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    • 2
    • T&PS 2023 #3, T&PS 2023 #4
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      Description of problem:

      Style issues in 'Red Hat OpenShift Container Platform' doc > 'Driver Toolkit' chapter > 'Specialized hardware and driver enablement' section > 'Finding the Driver Toolkit image URL in the payload' subsection: http://file.emea.redhat.com/tshwartz/OCPBUGS-6709/hardware_enablement/psap-driver-toolkit.html

      Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):

       

      How reproducible:

       

      Steps to Reproduce:

      1.For main, 4.13, and 4.12, change the format of the code in step 1 to match that in version 4.11.
      2. Change step 1 text to 'Use the 'oc adm' command to extract the image URL of the 'driver-toolkit' corresponding to a certain release.' (all versions)
      3. Change step 2 text to 'Obtain this image using a valid pull secret, such as the pull secret required to install {product-title}.' (all versions)

       

      Actual results:

      1. Code block in correct format across versions 2. Sentences changed from passive > active tense.

      Expected results:

       

      Additional info:

      SME: Simone Massimo Zucchi, QE: Lital Alon

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            rhn-support-tshwartz Talia Shwartzberg
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