Please revert these changes in section 8.5. Cluster Topology Communication:
1. Current sentence:
This topology message consists of the cluster names and the information of the nodes that belong to the cluster.
Revert back to:
This topology message consists of the cluster name(s) and the information of the nodes that belong to the cluster.
Justification: It changes the meaning of the sentence. It is usual that a cluster has only one name.
2. Current sentence:
Let us continue with the example of server X being our starting point and a client application looking up a stateful bean and invoking on it.
Revert back to:
Now that we know how the cluster topology information is communicated from the server to the client, let see how failover works. Let us continue with the example of server X being our starting point and a client application looking up a stateful bean and invoking on it.
Justification: there is no need to omit this sentence.
3. Current sentence:
During these invocations, the client side must have collected the cluster topology information from the server.
Revert back to:
During these invocations, the client side will have collected the cluster topology information from the server.
Justification: It changes the meaning of the sentence. With "must" used, it sounds as a prerequisite and it is not.
Please revert these changes in section 8.6. Remote Clients on Another Instance:
4. Current sentence:
This topology information will include the node information of server Y, because the information belongs to the cluster along with server X.
Change to:
This topology information will include the node information of server Y, because the server Y belongs to the cluster along with server X.
Justification: It completely changes the meaning of the sentence, it makes no sense right now.
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JBEAP-7863 [7.1] Developing EJB Applications: dubious changes in sections 8.5. and 8.6.
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