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  1. Hybrid Cloud Infrastructure Documentation
  2. HCIDOCS-681

Fix user/cluster-managed networking section

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    • HCIDOCS 2025#6, HCIDOCS 2025#7, HCIDOCS 2025#8, HCIDOCS 2025#9
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      Understanding differences....

      Missing hyphen: "User managed networking ...". That sentence is also verbose. Recommend removing fluff like "is a feature".
      TS: I would just say: User-managed networking allows... DONE

      Sentence fragment in lead-in sentence: "Examples include:" DONE

      Typo: "VIP addressses" DONE

      Validations

      First sentence is fluff. Recommend removing it. DONE

      Full term + abbreviation should appear first: "The MTU validation verifies the maximum transmission unit (MTU) value ..." Rewrite so that "maximum transmission unit" appears at the beginning of the sentence, not in the middle. DONE

       

              rhn-support-tshwartz Talia Shwartzberg
              apinnick@redhat.com Avital Pinnick
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