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  1. Hybrid Cloud Infrastructure Documentation
  2. HCIDOCS-538

[enterprise-4.17] Issue in file installing/installing_bare_metal_ipi/ipi-install-expanding-the-cluster.adoc

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      Preparing bare metal node, step 4, has very ugly callouts, many of which are probably overdocumentation and can be removed. Example: "Replace <nic1_name>, <ip_address>, <dns_ip_address>, <next_hop_ip_address> and <next_hop_nic1_name> with appropriate values."

      I recommend removing callouts for user-supplied values that are self-explanatory and then following the standard 1-callout-per-line structure.

      Callout #4 should probably be a separate procedure.

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              apinnick@redhat.com Avital Pinnick
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