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[CQA Stories] Improve lengthy sentence in docs

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      Content: https://docs.redhat.com/en/documentation/openshift_container_platform/4.18/html/virtualization/installing 

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      • Areas where more concise or direct language could be used:

      For the sentence "While it is possible to select the Manual approval strategy, this is inadvisable because of the high risk that it presents to the supportability and functionality of your cluster.", a more concise alternative could be: "Avoid Manual approval strategy due to high risks to cluster support and functionality." or "Selecting Manual approval strategy is not recommended, as it poses a high risk to cluster support and functionality."

              rhn-support-miweiss Miriam Weiss
              rhn-support-sjess Sabrina Jess
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